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Miles Davis in Paris

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I remembered someone saying

– with first name familiarity

but too young to have known him –

Miles would never

have stooped to a moonwalk.

 

Looking back through a nicotine haze

to the husky chic of the fifties

and then beyond, I might have added

or a Bojangles shuffle.

 

The first time he played in Paris

the habitués of St Germain 

queued up to see him backstage.

 

When he improvised his score

to Ascenseur pour l'échafaud,

his horn was the loneliest

sound that year.

 

 

 

 

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Dominic James

Thu 24th Jul 2014 12:39

marvellous - and it makes a scaffold out of the stage. From your poem, to you-tube, and back again, computers have their benefits, but curiosity would have got me there in the end.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 23rd Jul 2014 11:29

A superb work, always with so much contained within the sphere of the actual words.

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Ged the Poet

Tue 22nd Jul 2014 19:31

'Looking back through a nicotine haze
to the husky chic of the fifties...'
Yet again your ability to set the scene of the Jazz era. The cover picture is enough to pull any open minded music lover in.

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 21st Jul 2014 22:55

...and a wail of a poem David. Jazz in its feel.

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