Wide Awake
Shocked wide awake.
A dream that has unsettled my well being, my state.
Thoughts now anchored firmly in my mind.
Unable to shake them off i try to unwind.
Darkness overwhelms me, doubled with dreams.
My thoughts are racing, my heart bursting at the seams.
Talk myself in to a quite smoke.
Thoughts lost in stars with every toke.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Sun 24th Aug 2014 12:02
Once again, a very poetic grasp of experience and its personal expression. If 'doubled with dreams' is an accident, it is sure a good one; the effect is excellent. But I do think you mean 'quiet' and not 'quite'.
Most people like a name, and a face too, to relate with. It does get a bit vexing, because some names are silly pseudo's, and that really annoys me personally.
I get the feeling that English is not your first language. Not sure why.