Painful Poison
-The ramblings of another young girl-
written: 7/16/14
These raindrops
that slide slowly
down my window,
remind me of
my aching heart,
as it pumps its
painful poison
throughout my entire body.
.L.m.P.
Comments
Very good description of heartache.
<Deleted User> (9882)
Sun 17th Aug 2014 10:19
Although I love this poem .L.m.P.
I would have written/typed it into being a little clearer in its meaning by having the seventh line read..'its poison of pain'.
There again each readers own interpretation
should suffice as it should with every poem.x
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.L.m.P.
Mon 24th Nov 2014 03:31
Thank you both!