Whites
Colors
Silks
Buttons
Bows
I glimpse your eyes fixed on me.
Fresh
Soft
Cottons
Warm
"Would you like to help me fold?"
Shy
Smile
Intimate
Touch
"I thought you'd never ask."
© Candice Reineke 2014
Glad you got it, Daniel :) Aaaah, life's simplest moments.
Such warmth from an innocent and awkward moment. This gave me a great big smile. Nice one.
Thanks Alexandra and Andy :)
the structure here is excellent. very, very clever. enjoyed this a lot.
I love the way you have structured this, it strengthens the our ability to picture the exchange between the two characters
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charliebrogan
Thu 11th Sep 2014 00:11
I love this! so intimate and sweet. The structure is great. x