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Mother

She’s a fading flower

Not nearly as bright as she used to be

Though now she shines in a different way

Though she always shines to me

 

She’s filled with determination,

And don’t try to tell her what to do:

She’s stubborn,

And she’ll do what she needs to do

 

The day I can’t do my shopping

Is the day I’m finished, she says.

And she eyes me with disdain

Because it’s her job to make the tea,

Not mine.

 

She's a fading flower

Not nearly as bright as she used to be.

Though her heart shines in the darkest night

Like a beacon, to me.

motherMum

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Steve Higgins

Wed 8th Oct 2014 23:10

Thanks for looking in Natalie and you two Wildes

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Wed 8th Oct 2014 16:10

Awww! God bless 'em all! now then Steve,although it is nice to see you blogging,will you do as you're told,and put that bloody glass down-or pass it in our direction!...:o|..xx

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Steve Higgins

Tue 7th Oct 2014 23:38

Much appreciated Daniel, thanks.

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Ged the Poet

Mon 6th Oct 2014 10:14

Strong and poignant Steve. I really like this. Love shown in this piece hits the reader right between the eyes. Nice one.

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