(before you send the entry)
Chime, prime, grime, entwine, paradigm,
mountain-climb, or even sublime the bloody thing.
But never, ever, ever, ever,
Ever, ever, ever, ever
(Under no imaginable circumstances whatsoever)
Rhyme the bloody thing.
Harry - seen and noted!! :-)
Prose and rhyme - both have their time
And can sometimes get in the way.
But the really great just communicate
- we hear what they need to say.
My sympathies Harry!
Regards,
A.E.
Enjoyed this subtle and thought provoking piece Harry.
I read a recent discussion on the forum and in my humble opinion validates your 'Sound Advice'
'Rhyme in poem or song has been known to make people weep as well as laugh aloud, and that
surely says it's time to assert its
importance'..... M.C. Newberry
(I hope you do not mind me quoting this MC)
<Deleted User> (9882)
Mon 6th Oct 2014 15:57
'YOU CAN'T WIN ANY WAY'can you,eh HARRY?...;0)x
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charliebrogan
Thu 9th Oct 2014 00:11
This made me giggle. I'll remember it!!! x