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For rest.

He was a forest,

Serene and peaceful blends,

Resonant sounds from tasteful birds,

Crescendo stong on the skys end.

 

He transformed to a leaf,

So callous, lacking empathy,

A lead coloured pole through the neck,

Sunk in the shore, his sympathy.

 

He then, formed to fire,

Bitter to the deepest core,

Crisping every branch fallen under,

 WIth not a spirit to endure.

 

Alas, he was a match into water,

Only an embrace rushed his nerves,

WIth a snowball burrowing in his chest,

Left with only her voice to be heard.

◄ Autumn

Forest maiden[P1] ►

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UInk

Wed 3rd Dec 2014 01:58

This is an interesting poem. I've read this poem a few times and its words have a deep meaning. One thing was the last verse has me a bit confused. I think that it just need a slight change and it will flow wonderfully keep the deep meaning intact.

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