For rest.
He was a forest,
Serene and peaceful blends,
Resonant sounds from tasteful birds,
Crescendo stong on the skys end.
He transformed to a leaf,
So callous, lacking empathy,
A lead coloured pole through the neck,
Sunk in the shore, his sympathy.
He then, formed to fire,
Bitter to the deepest core,
Crisping every branch fallen under,
WIth not a spirit to endure.
Alas, he was a match into water,
Only an embrace rushed his nerves,
WIth a snowball burrowing in his chest,
Left with only her voice to be heard.
UInk
Wed 3rd Dec 2014 01:58
This is an interesting poem. I've read this poem a few times and its words have a deep meaning. One thing was the last verse has me a bit confused. I think that it just need a slight change and it will flow wonderfully keep the deep meaning intact.