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IT'S SO HOT

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It’s so hot
Let’s stop here my lady
It’s so cool, and
The trees are so shady
Oh! it’s so hot

Come, let us undress and do without
Us!  M’lady,  I’ll not bare my plums
I’ll sit and look out,
And, warn you if anyone comes
Very  well.  Please give a genteel shout
She unlaced her bloused top
Bared her chest. Not to entice
Splashed them, once, then twice
Stooping low, her breasts they did beckon
Sentinel did glance, just a swift check on
Lady calls, come join me and share
The stream’s cool embrace
On my feet, on my hands, trickling down my face
And see how my ‘nips’ stand forth, Oh!
Someone comes, we must swiftly go

Fingers hastily work because of her fright
Fastening laces so tight
She turns, with a smile, so bright
A gentleman, raising his hat. So right
A scene.  To forget. 
No!
A scene to delight.

Artwork by Jack Purvis OOPs  ©

 

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jack purvis

Thu 13th Nov 2014 13:42

Thank you MCNewbury
Your comment gives me hope

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 13th Nov 2014 13:27

An intriguing vignette that seems at one with the
illustration that accompanies it. I thought
the final lines of haste and good mannered
reaction were pleasing...with the consistent
rhyming catching the hurry to regain
"respectability".

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jack purvis

Sun 9th Nov 2014 16:54

Thank you Cynthia
I am but trying, with a great deal of sighing

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 9th Nov 2014 13:09

Mr Purvis, I like the gist of this very much, the charm in both art and poem. Conversation is not easy to insert without punctuation, but I did sort it out. The lines could be made more easily followed.

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