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Tinsmith

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Tin to mouth

Tin to feet

One jig to reel

enough to eat

 

Is he broken, broke, breaking

on the pavement by the station?

Is he played, paid, playing

to his own tune or to yours?

 

Tin to mouth

Tin to feet

Two jigs to reel

enough to eat

 

Do you jingle jangle shillings

in your pocket as you’re walking

past the tinsmith making

all the magic in your ears?

 

Tin to mouth

Tin to feet

Three  jigs to reel

enough to eat

 

Does your breath push pictures

through a rusting whistle?

Can you fingerpaint

a Raggle Taggle Gypsy-o?

 

Tin to mouth

Tin to feet

Do you have

enough to eat?

 

Will your blind eye see?

Might you turn to tin

if you pay no heed

to the picture that you’re in?

 

By the grace of god,

let the queen’s head drop

to the tinsmith’s feet

on a street that can run

two ways.

 

 

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Comments

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Laura Taylor

Thu 20th Nov 2014 12:09

Hey thanks Harry! Aye, I see a lot of poems where I just can't work out the rationale behind the text positioning :D

Cheers Andy!

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Andy N

Thu 20th Nov 2014 10:32

i can hear bob putting a tune to this, laura. first rate piece. whether it is a poem or a song, i am unsure but i do like it

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Harry O'Neill

Wed 19th Nov 2014 20:37

Laura,
At last! a logical use of aptly shaped and
positioned stanzas.

The tin-whistly `why` of it is as clear as the peep peep of the whistle.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 19th Nov 2014 13:39

:) Many thanks to you Cynthia. And I'm glad you saw the music in it. I hesitated over putting it up on here actually, but then I thought, well, why not? Songs and poems are so interlinked anyway :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Tue 18th Nov 2014 12:44

I was reading a 'lyric' as well, before I ever got to your comment. This is a perfect poem that deserves to be 'popular' in the sense of well-understood and then well-known, memorable and quoted. A good tune will be the perfect partner, and catalyst. Good for your lovely Bob.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 18th Nov 2014 09:42

This turned out to be more of a song than a poem, and my lovely Bob has already put a tune to it. A tune which is maddeningly catchy as it goes and I can't get the bloody thing out of my head!!

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