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Nativity ‘73

 

He’d three lines and a gleaming neck,

stank of Imperial Leather.

I was gagged and tidemarked,

the Mother of the Messiah.

 

Under strict instruction

I smiled beatifically

with muted mouth, and purple feet,

in Bethlehem, in Primary.

 

Virgin Mary, Mother of God.

Silenced, made to breed.

But Joseph (famous cuckold)

was worth three lines of speech.

 

King Herod had a massive part

and Gabriel spoke twice.

The shepherds sang in unison

of washing socks by night.

 

The innkeeper had dialogue

beyond a mere “we’re full”.

The narrator did the voices

of all the animals.

 

But Virgin Mary, Mother of God,

was silenced, made to breed,

and Joseph (famous cuckold)

was worth three lines of speech.

 

The three wise men monopolised

the middle of the play,

droning on about their gifts

and rustling the hay.

 

The angels got more words than me

and they were thick as owt!

Bless`d Mother of the Messiah

broke her silence with a shout:

 

The absolute injustice!

What a shit nativity!

I’m the saintly Virgin Mary

not some wanker off the street!

How come them lot all get lines?

Do you know who I am?

I’m the mum of fucking Jesus!

This nativity’s a sham!

 

I kicked the manger over,

set fire to the straw.

Punched Joseph in his soapy face,

threw Jesus to the floor.

I tore the wings off angels,

got arrested by the Plod.

I’m five years old,

I know my rights!

I’m the mum of fucking God!

Gerroff!

 

 

* This poem was based on true events. Which ones would be telling ;)

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Laura Taylor

Wed 17th Dec 2014 10:31

Ah thank you both :)

Probably not THAT articulate, Cynth, but I was a little smart arse, so you never know ;)

To expand on Ian's point, when I performed this at the open mic in Wigan, I stamped my foot at the end (unknowingly) and managed to set off a domino effect with several guitars that were resting against a wall behind me, a mic from the stand, and apparently the lighting rig nearly went too. I just became slowly and painfully aware of a terrible cacophony to my left, and watched it unfold, guitars crashing to the floor etc. Erm, mortified is the word!

Last time I blaspheme in public let me tell you! When I last blasphemed during a set, there was an almighty lightning strike and a massive crack of thunder! Ooo errr!!!

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Ian Whiteley

Tue 16th Dec 2014 19:39

OK - ya got me - wonderfully anarchic and reads like a beaut - pity the poor guitars of Wigan when missy gets a strop on ;-)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 15th Dec 2014 21:20

I LOVE your work. From the first four lines this Christmas Nativity just rocks! Full of the angst of competitive theatre and the underlying bathos of limited interest.

I'm presuming the 'cuckold bit' was not of interest at five years old? Maybe I'm wrong. Perhaps the idea was clearly perceived without the vocabulary.

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Laura Taylor

Mon 15th Dec 2014 12:06

Thanks you two :) Glad you enjoyed it :)

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Greg Freeman

Fri 12th Dec 2014 05:56

Great opening. Love this rampage through the nativity tableau, Laura.

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Judi Strega

Fri 12th Dec 2014 05:21

Oh, I LOVE it...even whilst I'm thinking, "How dare she?" Love that you dare.

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Laura Taylor

Wed 10th Dec 2014 09:34

Thanks Chris :) Be seeing you tomorrow night hopefully!

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chris yates

Tue 9th Dec 2014 20:37

Ha ha so funny the last verse is hilarious beating up Joseph lol : )

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Laura Taylor

Tue 9th Dec 2014 09:50

Cheers Stephen! I do wonder how many silent Marys there have been in all these years?!

Steve Smith

Mon 8th Dec 2014 16:35

Very Good -way to go Laura a parable within a tale.!!!
Steve Smith

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