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Changing Times

There were mornings I couldn't wait to serve you

coffee, made with love so pure

it would drip all over into the little percolator

you bought me, reminding me to make it

strong enough to grow nails on a man's chest

as I woke you up with a mug

steaming, wafting smells so sweet

java for your soul

your nose wrinkling, choosy, a sip

to taste if perfection in a white mug had made

its way to your bed, by me

in your old boxers and pretty much nothing else

my hair in disarray, carefully arranged on my way in

my nipples ready for your lips

draped all over you, your knees between my legs.

And now I couldn't care less if you go without

coffee, me or whatever.

Everything changes

and not necessarily for the better.

 

 

◄ Bitter fruit

Dowry, or shall we call it voluntary gift ►

Comments

Preeti Sinha

Thu 27th Nov 2014 13:18

Change is needed i think. You are using good quotations !

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 27th Nov 2014 12:03

"The more things change, the more they stay the same". Jean-Baptiste Alphonse Karr

Preeti Sinha

Thu 27th Nov 2014 12:02

Thank u for reading !

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Alexander

Thu 27th Nov 2014 10:55

After the beautifully expressed anticipatory build-up, the last four lines are shattering - a wonderful effect!

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Andy N

Wed 26th Nov 2014 12:45

like the ending here in particular but nice piece all round

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