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The Sea

The sea...

My lovely bold sea...

She's bleeding...bleeding profundly!

No, they can't make an entry there..try try..hard enough!

The fault can not be blamed on anyone,

The glory to be named on everyone...they do smile on the prophecies, in a good way!

Tame the sea and she will be yours,

But, who has understood the flow of current....can be in any direction!

Through your stones into her heart and no...she can not quiver unless she really wants to!

Yes, you do pamper her a lot...but at your own risk,

The tides are ultimate, they do scare you!

My sea bleeds....a lot!

I say, let her bleed, anyways you can not touch her, remember at your own risk!

I say let her bleed, the tides are scary and remember "at your own risk"!!!

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 15th Jan 2015 10:21

This piece has the feel of a 'haiku' dismembered. A conflation of several, with an argument that bonds them, a rhetorical argument. Tommy

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