What borders do
We came upon slowing traffic,
and stooped to stare
at the dancing distance
of a baked road.
...
Our eyes were wet and stung.
The metalled road blazed.
Our approaching gaze silent.
We released our pent breath.
The border had done what most borders do-
shrugged us through.
We walked past sun glassed
occupants of cars and the
rolled-up sleeves of lorry drivers,
passengers of crammed busses.
...
Post script: Later that afternoon,
Jez turned to me and asked,
"Is this what it's like to be drunk?"
I sipped from a glass I held,
I smiled as I slid my glass towards her...
...
words and foto T Carroll
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Martin Elder
Sun 28th Dec 2014 22:06
I like this because it is so evocative
'Our eyes were wet and stung'
Fantastic