Swan (Shinsen feat. Noetic Fret)
I have had some positive feedback for this poem. So i have taken it a stage further. Its a treat, see what you think. Shinsen by kind permission of Susumu Yokota, Skintone Records.
Swan
1
When mine ears spring the
fine hairs I searched for in nether
regions as a boy,
When the gait is haunched and
double clowned and clothes
be further torn,
when murder becomes
the complacency you feared when
twenty four, and boredom
rocks the soil,
will you say;
in times when drugs are neither
here nor there, and alcohol,
no longer restrains the pain
will you say;
I believe in you?
Will love still proclaim your faith
whilst heaving to and fro?
2
Will you still accept the rose
I give, or; like the scabs upon my lips
the rose be found flaking on the floor,
a floor to darken soles of feet,
in a house tired upon its creaking,
or weeping, like the sap of
ancient trees the walls the council
never coursed;
Will you let it fall?
Will it fall my dear,
My love,
My sweet, will you let it go -
quicker than your dreams I
slowly swept,
kept hidden
in the only tidy place,
beside where the dustpan slept.
3
Will the words;
I love you, be uttered truthfully
again, or will the eyes droop
in shameful recognition,
the mistake took twenty-seven
years to make?
Or will,
will the future bless a fragment
of eternity together, with a little
love success?
(Bless me with
those words my dear! Sing a song
to keep the romance near, and say
those words again).
4
Will our castle set in
ancient woods, boast a family
with children, will the children
play their games without
the fear of safety nets,
or will society be there like
hyenas paws, keen with
ability to pounce.
Will our blood be clean,
no longer shed in wars from disbelieving
accusation, will peace at last be just,
and honoured thus, and only
once afforded?
5
Will, like the rise and fall
of moons and suns;
there be a new day every day?
Each day upon crystal
dew in summertime, a time
of twilights we admire,
Each satellite of golden hours -
holding hands like
sovereign towers of strength;
each memory, a smile of decadence.
6
Worlds conquer!
Zulu Nations and Britannia
have never always courted favour,
But if my heart that's full,
from touch and sensual nature;
the woman that you are, and
our love be a battery of neon;
Then this light shall never fade,
never take the ambience within
we bathe.
I, You,
Our children too,
We will not know till there,
But if strength of bond
we made, holds each and every
day till then, this bond
of love reflected in each others
universal eyes, will carry
through these smiles,
will take us through till death.
And though performers sing
'Que Sera Sera,'
I will never bid you my
wife,
A last goodbye.
Michael J Waite 30th April 2009 0141hrs.
Isobel
Tue 5th May 2009 13:24
I liked this poem with and without sound Mike. What a shame you wiped out your comments by resubmitting it. Can't remember my words exactly but it was along the lines of:-
I found the poem very touching - obviously a lot of history here that we can only guess at.
Izz x