The college years
Enter the pretty young things
With fresh faced blue jeaned legs
Their hair long and blond
Flowing free
Not yet tied back
Tied up
Not yet constrained
By babies, lovers, soft furnishings
Hard decisions and crushed dreams
Their conversation glittering awash
With all there is to do
Bags and coats
Eyes ablaze
With questions, thoughts and ideas
Not for them bright coloured packages tied up with string
Nor spotty faced Herbert’s
Too shy to offer suit, wary of words that sting
For them it is the real thing
For them it is sparkling eyes
And nervous flashing smiles
For them bright carefully sprinkled, spoken words
For them at sixteen a brave new world
All too soon chased away
The college years
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 27th Jan 2015 11:25
This is really good, Martin. IMO, many lines are outstanding; 'BRIGHT CAREFULLY SPRINKLED SPOKEN WORDS' is superb.
'hair long and blonde'? Was there a 'blond-dye thing' in those years? Or were those the only girls you/boys actually noticed? I like the honesty and hate the implication - my problem, not yours.