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The Junk Shop

I was lost among the old junk,
in the farthest of corners, when
I heard a clock ticking away.

It had a rhythm of its own,
though the ticks were separate
it appeared to echo instead,

and when I watched the clock face,
the second hand would twitch a bit
before jumping to the next notch.

'Must be a pice of junk,' I thought,
then I looked down and checked my watch,
and it read the same exact time.

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that bloody poet

Mon 23rd Feb 2015 12:55

Thanks Autumn! This poem was inspired by Robert Frost. I just got his complete works. I know we should stick true to ourselves, and I regret having lowered my standards of poetry at the start of the year. Some may have liked the change, but I repent, and am going back to my roots and will read much more than I write.

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Sun 22nd Feb 2015 20:11

Really like this Jimmy. Has a nice feel of nostalgia about it and the last line gives it that surprise factor.

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