THE DAY DONE.
By stealth, in hushing monochrome,
a narrow palette pares the gloam,
and colour’s crowd is seen to thin
as night begins its inking in.
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Comments
Hi Travis, you've produced a quality piece here, with a gloriously clever last line. Tommy
Wed 11th Mar 2015 10:29
Hi Travis, I love this!! So clever :)
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Travis Brow
Thu 12th Mar 2015 06:39
Thank you Lea, thank you Tommy, I appreciate your comments. I half expected to be pulled up over 'gloam'. I knew it should really be 'gloaming' but it turns out Keats used 'gloam' so I took that as an auspicious precedent.