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BRAIN BUGS

A whisper of jitter bug spiders’ builds,
In my mind, spinning humorous, tickling,
Threads of sticky dense fog. Spreading tendrils,
Of forgetful and unmotivated.
My musings and imaginings concealed,
Within obtuse membrane of silken loss.

 

◄ THIS GALLIPOLI

Sitting On A Chair Arguing About Computing ►

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Jackie Phillips

Wed 15th Apr 2015 09:43

Thanks do much guys for your comments. I feel mega smiley now. :-)))))

Lan

Sat 11th Apr 2015 02:39

Jackie, this is so lovely - I can feel it, really sort of tactile, thanks :)

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John Bastard

Fri 10th Apr 2015 11:43

holy smokes this is beautiful.

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Jackie Phillips

Fri 10th Apr 2015 08:37

Thank you, it brings a big smile to my face when somebody enjoys what I have written. :-D

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that bloody poet

Thu 9th Apr 2015 00:59

i really enjoy this. :)

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