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Is this what borders do?

In Algiers I held a glass

that held a face's stare

In the glass the face that stared

stared back at me in fear.

 

We came upon slowing traffic.

Inside the ancient bus

the standing passengers

were gently rocked as it edged

along the unfinished road.

 

We passed the sun-glassed occupants

of cars and busses

and the rolled-up sleeves of lorry drivers.

Tanned arms hung out of windows;

fingers tapping an unheard beat.

 

I stooped to stare at the dancing distance

of the baked highway.

The metalled road blazed.

 

People gripped passports

Identity papers, rosary- beads.

Their Letters of transit were not needed;

the border did what most borders do-

it shrugged us through.

Smiles become all languages.

 

Later I sat staring

out the window of a bar

hardly blinking-

A bus stopped

and people got off.

A dog scratched.

The sky was blue and cloudless.

 

I lifted a cold drink.

Watching.

Then Jez turned to me and asked,

"Is this what it's like to be drunk?"

I smiled

as I slid my wine towards her...

 

words T Carroll

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steve pottinger

Tue 21st Apr 2015 08:23

"Smiles become all languages."
What a beautiful line!
A poem to read and re-read. Thanks.

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Martin Elder

Mon 20th Apr 2015 22:55

This is another good poem Tommy. I love the opening lines in particular. Nice one

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Tommy Carroll

Mon 20th Apr 2015 20:44

Cheers Graham, Mike Harry. I always appreciate comments, though ofttimes I forget to respond. Cheers Tommy

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Harry O'Neill

Sun 19th Apr 2015 22:25

Tommy,
This got me wondering if the historical usurping of poetry as the supreme art form by the novel is the reason why this type of suggestive, clue-larded, minimal, novella
type poems seem to win so many poetry competitions these days.

(I like the D.I.Y. element in this)

<Deleted User> (4172)

Sun 19th Apr 2015 17:54

Good poem.

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Graham Sherwood

Sun 19th Apr 2015 10:48

Really evocative piece this Tommy, feeling like it leads somewhere and then leaves the reader wondering about you and Jez, where why who etc. Nicely lean too.

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