Concrete Eyes
I need to shade my eyes
From the grit that’s
On these streets
From dirtying my windows
And setting in my mind
The nine year old
Screaming gutter abuse
At her mother
While she pats her
On the head
Caves in and
Gives her another
The compensation vultures
Circling the pool of claims
Planning their next gain
Picking out riches
From between the bones
Of higher premiums paid
Advertising portrayed
In candy coloured
Raffle tickets and sold
Like sweets
Donations staying
Firmly in the bag
Turning sweetly to swag
The Magistrate
Sentencing ‘something’
From a pre written script
With no vision
Giving out directions
Whilst not looking
At the final destination
The child who has no shades
Who sees things a child
Should never see
Exposed to full grit
With no shades to pass on
There will be no protection
For his son
The family who ring ‘999’
Shouting taxi
For their day out
To see the
Doctors and Nurses
Dead on their feet
And then complain
At the end of the day
That they had to wait
And there was fuck all
For tea
The father who removes
The roof from
Over his own loins
Having a final wank of
Abuse and hate
Hammering the mothers heart
Into the shape of a collection plate
The woman whose happiness
Is carried around for all to see
In a yellow and black cardboard bag
Using her tissue paper womb to
Catch, entrap and grow a seed
Her Johnny Cash comes
Gift wrapped
But he forgot his happy bag
If we meet out
On the street
And I put on my shades
It’s to stop the grit
Turning in your
Mixer mind
From spewing out
And concreting my eyes
Lynn Hamilton 13.04.2015
Andy N
Mon 8th Jun 2015 12:48
yeah, i agree with Cynthia. this may work better as a series of poems but you have my respect for trying to do it as one poem and the ideas are certainly there..