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BEDOUINS AT LARGE

bedouins at large on silent wheels

gliding heavily motoring steadily

aloft with mysterious power!

docking mocking their disability

sailing on with quiet utility

gaining ground and gaining respect

with slightly threatening immediate effect.

Reversing rehearsing their cumbersome moves

for ever more 'til time runs out

aloft with battery power!

They carry their history

their traction a mystery

briefly stopping to do their shopping, shopping

more shopping but never dropping.

Baskets in front grids behind

flying ahead with cages lined.

Beware the marauding chest - high beasts

with their kangaroo pouches and microwave feasts.

(In the style of Night Mail by WHAuden)

◄ WE WALK TOGETHER

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raypool

Sun 17th May 2015 21:08

Well spotted Greg. Some may take offence, but I hope not, as we all share life , some more equally than others no doubt..!

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Greg Freeman

Sun 17th May 2015 10:45

You do have to watch out for these bedouins sometimes, Ray! Glad you gave a nod to Auden at the end - I didn't immediately spot it, but you can't be too careful these days!

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