TANK GRAVEYARD
Down by the single track railway
into bracken, through barbed wire forced down,
thistles and long grass we went
to where those rusting tanks lay choked with hawthorn
and the refused offering of nettles -
supplicants face to face tops gone,
yellow tracery of arthritic controls welded by weather.
Wedged in where rodents made a home, dumped
in the sunset of world - weary time.
Combatants dried up, knuckled down.
We fought each other invisible through turret holes
lit by the myopic eye of the sun,
held down in a dream, mercifully spared
the blood spill, star burst of muffled fear,
And then anxious for home and the umbilical call
we caught the wild - eyed train.
I am lost
Sat 23rd May 2015 13:51
I like this poem. It's written so well that I can almost see the scenery.