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Fate’s handwriting

 

Found a crushed paper

Beneath a lovely old book

Like one dropped by blues

Had an enigmatic look

 

Against questions unfathomable;

Thousand answers it opined

Penned was my name

 ‘Twas stamped as “DESTINED”!!

 

 I felt a connect,

And flipped a corner,

Bold chevron lines read,

“Seed and then garner”

 

Ink fluttered to allude

Loud and clear message;

 “Just and parallel I am,

None can cheat or escape”

 

“True roads would sun-lit

Though too hot and harsh”

 I hammer a hard-hit

When ‘firm’ becomes ‘brash’

 

Mystical creased page

Enveloped follies and grit

Gave a sure message

It ended in sweet

 

Sender was no stranger

Knew all my thick and thin

Puzzling but yet legible

It was Fate’s handwriting

© Juhi Gupte

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Juhi Gupte

Mon 8th Jun 2015 08:22

Thanks a tonne Lynn Hamilton for letting me know what my genre is called .. :)

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Juhi Gupte

Mon 8th Jun 2015 08:21


@ Cynthia Buell Thomas :: Pls take this as my in-person Thanks for your inputs

I will surely practise :)

Lynn Hamilton

Sun 7th Jun 2015 22:40

Hello Juhi

The way you write is 'right up my street'. Look forward to reading more of your work.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 6th Jun 2015 18:10

A very interesting idea. A bit rough in language maybe, but ideas themselves are the real gold of poetry. The actual words are just the 'next part', which can be duly acquired as you practise. Keep writing.

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