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Just-in-time

Blues don’t complain

For clouds are dense

Untold desires will rain

Dousing all in consequence

For they trust the Big Star

Will rise just-in- time

 

Seed when soiled

Smothered in darkness

Left out to be buried

is set to shed its brown

Believing the water splash

Will life it just-in –time

 

Rodents lair

Insects crawl

Micro-beings breathe

Free to survive

Assured that the gravity

Will clasp all just-in-time

 

Fluttering undoubtedly

Wings in-accordance

With the gusts;

Giants keep walking

Jaws and claws run

In reliance to the laws

Of Nature are just-in-time

 

Conditional and in suspicion

we nag and curse;

But backing all unbiased

Still and the moving

The Supreme wouldn’t betray

Once let the fait accompli

Salvage us just-in-time

 

© Juhi Gupte

belief   faith   hope

◄ Fate’s handwriting

TRAP!! â–º

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Juhi Gupte

Fri 10th Jul 2015 03:23

Thanks Cynthia Buell Thomas!!
Faith in Almighty is the central thought.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 9th Jul 2015 22:28

I like the deep idea behind this, the expression of a thinking mind.

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