I CAUGHT HER ON A SOFT TURN
I caught her on a soft turn such that
the sun was moved to laughter,
and all that had life lightened
with the look I gave
and the beat that I felt.
Smooth was the flow of her hip
and fluid as a rhyme.
A flock of birds escorted her in a livening breeze.
No one will ever be safe from such moments
and the grace that I thought was lost.
raypool
Sat 6th Jun 2015 22:17
It's a pleasure to catch a few thoughts in the fishing line of opportunity, even if you end up with the rubbish....
That line about the birds does maybe add a surreal touch, a sort of cinematic liberty. Cheers for your comments.
Ray