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Happy Ending

 Life is full of gifts,
The small details is what most people miss,
Everybody eventually wants love,
But some people will be "tough",
Because themselves they decieve,
They cannot allow themselves to believe,
Love does exist,
You just have to be willing to take that risk,
Learn to let go,
Let your heart take full control,
Take the fall,
And have your heart answer the call.

◄ Their Story

Facing A Break Down ►

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Vanna

Fri 19th Jun 2015 05:22

Thank you. Any advice and/or constructive criticism is welcome. I love writing, and some I wrote years ago.

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gavin purnell

Tue 16th Jun 2015 16:05

Your right alot of people will never know what love is. And most people experience different types of love.

Past looks, intelligence, character and personalities lies a sense of pure emotion which you can connect to and be at peace. You have to be brave and open minded as this is totally a unselfish act which can only be achieved when two people have the same awareness.

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Martin Elder

Fri 12th Jun 2015 17:30

Nice poem . Not over stated, just right.

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Tommy Carroll

Wed 10th Jun 2015 12:44

Don't listen to your Aunty Cynthia Vanna, rejoice in human contact, let your heart sing! :)

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 10th Jun 2015 11:57

Very wisely put. But I still think the heart needs a little caution. Life is a complicated business.

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