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Not from round here

Between every few steps

He staggers

He rocks

He sways like a sail

Caught in a gentle breeze

Then says to me

You’re not from round here

Are you?

I nod in the affirmative

Wanting to move on

As he seeks to make conversation

His ship now stuck fast

Perhaps like his thoughts

Run aground

The after a moment’s thought

He confidently declares

‘You are from London aren’t you?’

The soft Irish brogue purred

I want to disagree

To put him right

To explain that I come from further south

Where the land meets the sea

But realise that he would not understand

And I want to allow us both to slip free from

Our moorings

And so say yes

He nods and a smile breaks

Across his face

‘You see I knew

I could tell

From the moment that you spoke

When I asked you for a light’

At last we are able to break free

Each one now

To plough his own separate course

Me with great relief

To wend my way home

Him to steer a course

Who knows where

Somewhere out there

In the great unknown  

◄ Eyes

Brighton Beach ►

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Jeff Dawson

Mon 6th Jul 2015 23:22

Hi Martin, thanks for comment on Eternal City, yes just been to Rome, amazing, amazing place! Will probably go back and I rarely go same place twice!

Really enjoyed this poem here, felt like I was there, you've captured imagination, I also like the nautical and geographical references, excellent stuff, jeff

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Martin Elder

Fri 3rd Jul 2015 19:01

Thanks for all of your kind comments.
I guess it would be fair to say this is how I reacted to this situation some years ago now. Subsequently I have found myself in the intervening years working with people in social deprivation in one way or another and perhaps I may have approached the situation differently now but none the less he was quite dogmatic in making assumptions about me and as a result was not open then to hearing any different.

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Thu 2nd Jul 2015 10:30

Martin,this HAS to be your number one-(so far)

Excellent work!


Rose.x

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Tue 30th Jun 2015 23:12

I'm with Stu. I always try to move on quickly. But more than I like get dragged into what seems like a never ending conversation. Usually odd conversations that make me very uncomfortable. I really enjoyed reading this Martin.

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Andy N

Tue 30th Jun 2015 12:43

excellent, martin. enjoyed reading this.

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Stu Buck

Tue 30th Jun 2015 10:54

a well written account of something i dread (or that is how i interpreted it). i always get stuck talking to people i dont know and who alarm me.

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