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Parched Earth

Dark squares, parched, the earth

cracks open, revealing nothing

but a dry-eyed longing

for one drop of rain

as cattle watch, grazing on nothing but memories of green grass, as it once was

as men sit, defeat and worry

writ upon faces, lines 

telling stories of struggle

gazes which look up to the clear blue skies

fierce and relentless.

No rain will come again

this year, the radio blares.

And more farmers will swing

from trees some rich people forgot to cut.

 

 

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Corr Lens

Sat 1st Aug 2015 11:12

if you don't live in California you should come by. You're singing the song of our state.

and well.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 2nd Jul 2015 12:10

Very powerful, well-crafted images which could be any location, any man, any era. While I like the spin offered by the last line, I found it diluted the real strength of 'drought', turning the lines into the constant struggle of the rich versus the poor, in any capacity. I felt almost a bit sorry that I couldn't take the imagery at face value.

Only me, Preeti, craving release from symbolism. If you can believe it? Poets operate in the world of suggestion; there is no such animal as 'simple'.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 1st Jul 2015 17:35

Very powerful last two lines Preeti. A real knife-twister.

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