ON THE HEATH
I caught you with your pants down
frost white from medieval winds
crackling underfoot, ice - glass reflecting
and from knobbled ponds face up
the calm unblinking sky.
Photographed at a distance
small lockets of cold.
Your infinitesimally small response
a desperate winter's cry.
Dogs were sniffing at your face
perplexed by your scentless shell,
with stunted trees your fringes girt
pointing fingers at the hem.
Then marauding gulls in a plague of white
descended as to Bethlehem.
Graham Sherwood
Sun 5th Jul 2015 22:21
Ray, I can't remember whether I've commented on your work before but this is real quality stuff.
One of my criteria when reading a piece is "would I have liked to have written this" definitely.
Excellent work
Graham