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'Yes, I Will Wear One'

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Yes I Will Wear One

(lines written in response the suggestion that

those who are mentally ill should wear

wristbands to identify their conditions)

 

Yes, I will wear one:
retiring, undefeated,
or at least not admitting it,
as I back away,
hot tears rolling from eyes 
spiked with despair
down cheeks
hollowed by time,
I will wave 
both my arms
in the air, cry:
It's not me. It's them.
They are the ones
who are cruel 
to their fellows,
who are driven
by desire for 
consumables,
kept alive by fear
of their own emptiness
and justified
by profit and loss.
Just make it a pretty one;
make it the colour
of the skies
dappled with daisies,
celandines and buttercups,
pink hedgerow roses
and bluebells.
I will wear one
gladly.
I will wear it
with pride.
Mine should say this:
a well of wise sadness;
flawed but still
perfectly human.

Abigail Elizabeth Ottley Wyatt

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 18th Jul 2015 12:45

Beautiful, brave and bountiful. I look forward to more of your sensitive and embracing thoughts. I'm glad I went back a bit to catch up on missed entries.

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Abigail Wyatt

Fri 10th Jul 2015 22:16

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Actually, I am reading them having arrived home from an evening engagement which was difficult to get through because I am quite 'strung out' at the moment. This has made me feel better so thank you again.

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Helen Elliott

Fri 10th Jul 2015 21:07

Hi Abigail,

Your poem is beautifully phrased. I adored the change into the floral imagery.

Great stuff!

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Fri 10th Jul 2015 20:34

"flawed but still
perfectly human." So very true. So very beautiful.

R

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Freda Davis

Fri 10th Jul 2015 20:20

Spot on Abigail.
I agree with Robert.
It will be yellow stars next.
Freda

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Robert Mann

Fri 10th Jul 2015 18:29

Abigail,

Your words are both beautiful and poignant. As a 'survivor' of the rigours of mental stress and anguish, I appreciate the view that those who get through it have a greater insight, balanced judgement and are grounded in a more profound reality.

Let's see more of your work PLEASE.

Rob

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