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seep

in the gap between the tarmac
a pink opium poppy
                 - tattered - blooms

and she walks with splayed feet
- in pastel clothes - half dyed -
washed up from the toes
past the turned in knees
to the polka-dot double pram'd shoulders
- gurgling lullabies in plodding tune

they say she had to choose a number
                     - one two three -
and whichever she picked
                        would not flower

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Stu Buck

Tue 14th Jul 2015 17:38

great imagery and desolate feelings evoked.

Lynn Hamilton

Tue 14th Jul 2015 14:04

Jeremy. This is wonderful. I have created an image in my head and a sadness in my heart.

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