Going with the flow
I leave the station on the hill
Going with the flow
A shoal of bodies
Weaving
Winding
In unison to avoid the net
Some like spawning Salmon
Fight the expulsed tide
By going up stream
Jehovah’s witnesses
Standing battle ready
Disconsolate
Waiting, daring anybody to accept
The proffered hand
Holding a magazine
A book
Designed to bring belief
The tide washes past
Black sleeping bags
Bodies bagged up in foetal form
Splayed out like great ragged
Immovable
Immutable
Dark rocks
On the edge of the pavement
On the edge of life
No written sign
Saying do not disturb
But nobody will
They become a part
Of the landscape
Of the fast flowing tide
Not wanting to be ignored
Some have sat up
To greet a brand new day
The sleep of life still encrusted
On breath and face
Their expressions implacably
Static pleading
Dry lips move
But barely a sound uttered out
The cherished empty paper coffee cup
Saying
SHOUTING
Above the crowd
All there is to say
Any change please for a cup of tea
Occasional wheeled bags
Clatter, clack and spin
As others expel
From budget price hotel
Still the tide goes on
Past Piccadilly gardens
Crossing tram tracks and cars
Past news vendors and
Half way down Market Street
Before it begins to thin
Enter in to the early hours
Of St Anne’s square
Where shops and people are still waking
Brushing down, shaking
Waiting in anticipation
For the start of day
No buskers, no callers
No coffee sipping crawlers
Just the odd person
Moving gently
Gliding across the square
Late for the office
Heading for Deans gate
And out once again
On to the fast moving street
M.C. Newberry
Wed 29th Jul 2015 17:47
Your narrative takes the reader along with you - seeing
and experiencing the various vignettes of a commuter's
travels. This is exhilarating stuff!
I assume the "Piccadilly" shown links these lines to
Manchester - a city unknown to me as a Londoner with
knowledge of another Piccadilly.