Thousand Machine
A choral universe
is feeding out the tiny candles
of corners of rooms where play is delicate.
Is desire tangible in the hidden smile
of a brushed knee
and a shared cigarette?
Somewhere deep in a charcoal vein
is a hush and when it seems
that she is losing grip,
the room perfumes,
as warm as the amber
in the throat of wine.
A string of tea lights
sigh from a bed post
as the thunder from the outside
breathes a new galaxy into your eyes -
Your Thousand Machines,
twitching like a lovely heart attack.
It could be a fossil here,
it could be something you keep.
Shy can be a map that finds
her hidden
on every island, triggered a thousand times
more loudly
after the hands fall away.
Now, here and now,
speakers
grace the air with vowels
as coquettish
as melted chocolate
and shadows slip through your fingers
as the graze of her face
is sifted through the dark sweep of hair.
You both talk of landsacpes
and a painter
that leaves his canvas
as a constellation for a hunter
where sleepy cornfields
sing lullabies behind your eyelids.
A thousand times the paint splashed
back on her body,
sad,
because she still wears a summer dress in winter.
A thousand times, the heart break is more beautiful
when the hurt is hidden as if a girl's slip
and not a cross.
It is forgotton here;
the arms are not bruised,
both of you are dangling
from a branch
when laughter torched
your thousand smiles.
Strings at a peak will let
you know
you can move into her
a thousand times.
winston plowes
Tue 9th Jun 2009 14:23
Hi Marianne, I believe things are settling. lol. I have read this poem several times and each time something new breaks the surface. It never quite lets you in and doesnt allow things to settle. I think it is in your choice of combinations of words and phrases which jag around. eg just when you are settling down to a lullaby, paint splashes back on her body. It has an etherial almost sci-fi feel to me at times which Im struggling to explain in my words. Maybe your word are all we need to do this? Winston