a simple message
the eyelids of the horizon widened
in the embers of the flaming dusk
and I sat quite still.
The moving print of birds
wrote their goodbyes to the dying of the day.
A distant thread of water glimmered
as it showed off its nocturnal sheen.
The lungs of heaven all but closed
in their painless silence,
my eyes strained to the balance of spirit.
Then I saw the figure
moving slowly
weaving
as through the sight of a gun seeking focus
closer in the deepening sky.
Ever closer the figure came
lit by the embers of the dimming dusk.
Finally he came to a stop some yards ahead
jagged in the rays with a shirt of raspberry red.
He saw me and pointed to my right
at which I turned face
the crew
with their webbing of cameras, booms
microphones vehicles assistants.
Light had flooded out to shame the night.
"That long shot was good!
Let's go for the close up now......and.....rolling
up to speed and....."
Like a lance the command: " and action!"
The raspberry man burst like ripe fruit
into his simple message
a sermon of commercial offerings
that would erase all doubt
what life is really all about.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Sat 15th Aug 2015 07:35
disappointed Ray - I was enjoying the drama documentary until the film crew stepped in - any chance you could get rid of them?
btw, I read the first half thinking about the poor chap who took his life at Dignitas yesterday.
btw btw, thanks for your recent comms to me.