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Tableau 2: Night of Years

 

Precious little phrase on repeat;

incantation soaring out to settle

dusty words of comfort.

 

Balm poured to keep us warm,

to soak us in a sense

of que sera sera.

 

The clock’s slow tock

ticking minutes

off the coil.

 

Vigil kept for breaking breath;                                               

we sit and tell in every tense

stories for release.

 

Smokers roll incessantly;

keeping fingers busy and excused

to bury sighs in plume’s relief.

 

Slow tock ticking

little minutes

off the coil.

 

Elasticated conversation

wraps around the chasm

of tomorrow, while our

cowardice and expectation

change each other’s mind

upon the hour.

 

Slow tock

ticking off

the coil.

 

Precious little phrase on repeat;

incantation soaring out to settle

dusty words of comfort.

 

Tick    

            slow    

tock

            minutes           

off.

 

 

◄ Tableau 1: Return of the Snow Queen

Tableau 3: Tempest ►

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Laura Taylor

Mon 24th Aug 2015 12:11

Cheers Steve :)

Steve Smith

Sun 23rd Aug 2015 20:37

Nice work Laura, I read "The Tempest" one on Facebook I think and am going to read the lot now.
Steve Smith

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Laura Taylor

Tue 18th Aug 2015 10:14

Thank you Graham - it's always a big compliment for one poet to give to another is that. Very much appreciated.

Well yes, I think so too. I'd like them to be able to stand alone as well, but they do work better as a whole series. That's why I'm breaking my usual rule of leaving a poem up for at least two weeks before blogging another.

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Graham Sherwood

Tue 18th Aug 2015 09:59

"we sit and tell in every tense"

another, I wish I'd written that line.

I have a feeling that these pieces will only strike home when they are all complete Laura. This one is haunting already though.

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Laura Taylor

Tue 18th Aug 2015 09:45

This is the third part of a series of five interconnecting poems - see the previous two poems. The series was inspired by hearing Finlandia by Jean Sibelius on the radio, preceding recent events in my life. As a big nod to Sibelius, I've decided to use a loosely-based symphonic structure, so the parts are laid out like this:

The Melting of the Ice

Movements:

1. Prelude
2. Tableau 1: Return of the Snow Queen
3. Tableau 2: Night of Years
4. Tableau 3: Tempest
5. Tableau 4: The Melting of the Ice

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