Tableau 3: Tempest
2am came to call.
Storm began to flicker, rise,
raiding every cell of wellness,
strength and hope
of morning light.
Her chest a bellows,
body bidding;
battles raging inwardly,
breaking down defence
on every side.
Shadows cough,
calling Time, spitting
past is present,
though the history is pushed aside,
ignored in a room too small
for the enormity
of now.
Tempest swells the brass intent.
The King and I sit hand in hand
in fierce light, while strings shimmer
syncopating rhythms
as the bellows break
to render final bidding.
With tiny tings,
a winter ends
Sibelius calls forth
a new beginning.
Laura Taylor
Mon 24th Aug 2015 12:14
Ha - now you REALLY got it Steve! I ALMOST used the actual words 'crescendo' and 'diminuendo' but they seemed ultimately too clumsy and obvious, so I tried to build it a different way and it pleases me like you wouldn't believe that it worked, that you felt it.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment - your opinion means an awful lot to me, as I think you're a brilliant writer.