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born in '85

i exist
outside of clothes
and make up
on a bed
making love
with you

◄ surfing is good

gutter ball girlfriend ►

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<Deleted User> (6292)

Sun 21st Jun 2009 12:38

Hello Emily
I love love love this poem.
It is exquisite, beautiful, it made me tremble.

Augusta x

<Deleted User> (5646)

Sun 14th Jun 2009 11:46

This is very deep yet cleverly constructed.
I really like this one Emily.

Janet.x

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winston plowes

Sun 14th Jun 2009 00:25

nice little gem Emily.Winston

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Isobel

Fri 12th Jun 2009 20:21

I like the simple ideas behind this.

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Andy N

Fri 12th Jun 2009 14:02

interesting piece, chuck.. gave me a idea or two too

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