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Fragile

Please don’t

Touch

Just leave her

Right there

 

Don’t move

Or adjust

Well maybe

A little

If you dare

 

Don’t break

She’s marked

‘Fragile’

And to be

Kept this

Way up

 

The dust

Has not settled

From the

Last sweep

Of the floor

 

And all

Breakages

Must be

Paid for

Before

Exiting

The door 

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Stu Buck

Sat 3rd Oct 2015 11:47

Hello Lynn,
In this quarters poetry review there is a review on a book by Kim Moore which contains a 17 poem run called 'How I Abandoned my Body to his Keeping'. This piece would slip beautifully anywhere in there I can imagine. I love the last stanza, and the theme of the piece as a whole. Its very clever. I cant comment to much, as I dont feel I have been in a close enough situation to come across as genuine, but I enjoyed the poem very much.
Stu

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