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waxwood prayer (10/04/2015)

Retired to a place where men die
old and comfortable by their favored brand of cigarettes,
burned themselves down and down into heroic coalsĀ 

down and down , the flags of the fathers
ashes reigning benevolence over sons in memoriamĀ 
a tired, doomed sphere in the middle of nowhere,
dandered with bones and renamed home.
It's all just a place with a hearth for hearts
where these earned embers leave their marks
a thousand crosses carried to an elephant graveyard n'er forgotten
forever and ever amen

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John Bastard

Thu 8th Oct 2015 00:28

i love you all.

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Jackie Phillips

Wed 7th Oct 2015 16:34

So deep. I do enjoy your poetry, sometimes I have to search to find meaning within your poems, as your are not one to be overly direct but this one spoke to me immediately. It's a beautiful poem.
Jackie x

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Stu Buck

Mon 5th Oct 2015 21:19

agreed. this is lovely. great use of alliteration throughout and it benefits from being brief and staying on point. as much as i enjoy your page long rambling streams (and i do!), its nice to have brevity every now and then. that applies to all poets though i suppose.
great lines abound, but my favourite is 'ashes reigning benevolence over sons in memoriam'. its brilliant.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 5th Oct 2015 11:31

This is one of your best Zach!
I don't think the layout suits easy reading but the words and images are wonderful.

Graham

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