autumnal haiku
the trees are now gold
everything is still as shit,
as it was before.
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the trees are now gold
everything is still as shit,
as it was before.
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Adam Whitworth
Fri 16th Oct 2015 10:06
The effort you have made here is obvious, i must applaud your determination. You have achieved the 5-7-5 syllable arrangement and also announced your work as a 'Haiku',
this is an impressive start and I believe you can develop even further, i would love to see your amazing progress.