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Fall

The leaves fall down
Why doesn't it make a sound ?
There is no need to frown
I'm not here to give your heart a wound
Look at the show, isn't it peaceful ?
Isn't that a reason to get cheerful ?

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luuu4444

Fri 30th Oct 2015 14:22

Thanks,Eric for your nice comment on my work
I like Fall too it brings peace and some sort of harmony.
I'm looking forward to more comments from you on my other work :)

Bg, Luca

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Eric Berard

Thu 29th Oct 2015 17:12

Fall is a beautiful time of year. All of the different colours and weather, and it's all just perfect. I like this piece, though small, it feels serene

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