performance without an audience
written with a broken heart
words of love that may have gone
though never meant to part
gregarious in his nature
with a Hidden depth
articulated feelings, from a soul inept
humility as a warning
sentences on a page
conceptual with the detail
affectation into rage
so scribe the written pasture
the beauty of the beast
place it on a page of hell
for whoever cares the least.
I enjoyed this. There is something really genuine about it Patricio. Thank you for posting.
I'd feel a little odd for commenting on a lot of your pieces haha, but I really like your writing. I get a sense of peacefulness from them
Thank you so much.. You are very generous
This is really good, as it feels so true, words of all of our emotions felt over time, filtered through a poem we use to outlet the emotion
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Patricio LG
Sun 15th Nov 2015 01:26
Thank you jade, very kind of you