4300 (11/15/2015)
laying here, tipping the edge of hurt
living in precipies
a mongrel of our omniverse
an everything, an always
writhing in exquisite pain
limbs caught in quantum vibrato
love breaks me like a hurricane
'i can't do this anymore.'
fervic fluid fills my cheeks, bites my tongue and poison leaks
cleans me like vinegar
climbs me: i am a diving board
chokes me: i am a tunnel vision.
'neither can i,'
soaring, double barreled
faces split twice in passing
transcontinental herald
bringing nukes for wartime glassing
frozen in heat, (me under your lashes)
paralytic stingers, memetic mantas
streets built on statues of ashes
the city's name is how my heart feels
born and raised down in atlantis
street sweeper, chastity keeper
honor killings for the dishonorable
inglorious basterd banner: indomitable
building antiempires one bullet at a time
jail's when i think of you
filed-tooth freedom is my crime
BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG BANG CLIK CLIK CLIK CLIK
CHORUS , CHORUS
filling up an empty room
IGNORE US IGNORE US
fear stitched lips, set sail for pending doom
ABHOR US ABHOR US
sausage makers' society
using shotguns like a broom
IT GOES BLACK
IT GOES BLACK
IT GOES BLACK
I MADE THIS FOR YOU.
heaven is knocking back
fulfilling a promised land:
it's astonishing
how our condition will build a pile of bodies
in lieu of a staircase.
reaching up, climbing, crawling,
(every speed on our knees is crawling)
over one another to stand alone
just to know what it's like to be on top
(over the top, to no man's land
three stars to the right and straight on til kristallnacht)
stand on the top
of the nothing we've become.
Stu Buck
Sun 15th Nov 2015 16:24
this is brilliant. the last two lines are sensational and the third verse flows beautifully.