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WHAT'S THE TIME ON MARS?

Take Big Ben     as it stands

rebuild it in the desert sands

 

see if time makes any sense

with its monstrous grandeur

under ancient stars

 

by the way, what's the time on Mars?

insanity

◄ DOVERCOURT BAY HOLIDAY CAMP 1950

THE WISDOM OF THE UPRIGHT SPINE ►

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raypool

Mon 16th Nov 2015 17:07

Nice point David. What I was aiming at was a metaphor for all that's British and looked up too here being perhaps ludicrous when transplanted into a different culture with its own mindset. Although things may have entirely changed in the desert lands now. I dunno.

You might hopefully put me right on this! ray

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