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Frets Removed

Strings

Strummed

Violently

Hard

Broke

Me

Apart

 

Springing

Back

They

Pierced

My Skin

And

Stabbed

My heart

 

Metal snakes

Wrapped

Around

My

Neck

Squeezed

It

Tight

 

Tears

Flowed

The frets

Removed

Everything

Felt

Nearly 

Right 

◄ Dot to Dot

Snap Shot ►

Comments

Lynn Hamilton

Thu 10th Dec 2015 22:47

Thanks Ray. Words came easy but a very hard one to blog. Eddie Hazel - Maggot Brain. First listen, made me stand still, was compelled to find out more. Apparently, he was told to play like his mother had just died on this track. Second listen, Mr H is a genius and plays grief on his guitar. No words could ever express what he expresses on that track. Scribble went down as I listened second time round.

Lynn x

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raypool

Tue 8th Dec 2015 22:18

Seemingly violent but actually very subtle Lynn I like the double act! I hope I got that right anyway.

Ray

Lynn Hamilton

Tue 8th Dec 2015 22:17

David, Thank you for your kind words about my words and the introduction to the genius that inspired. X

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