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My Brother

He is my brother,
     from another mother,
We met one year ago,
     when we were full of ego,
when we started talking,
     things were hallucinating,
He is my brother,
     from another mother,
We know each other so good,
     that we need not to wear any hood,
He is so charming,
    that girls go crazy ,
  while others feel dizzy,
He is a powerful weapon,
  who helps to fight my demon,
He is my brother,
     from another mother,
My thoughts perfectly glow,
   when I find text.."Hi bro"!
Bro,I am thankful that you were there,
  when there was no one to care,
You are my brother,
   from another mother,
I know this poem is not that much good,
  but its enough to show gratitude!

I'm Sensitive.. ►

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Ravi Tanna

Wed 16th Dec 2015 02:43

Thank You so much Ray..I don't have any real brother..but now I have brother from another mother..and thats why poem is written with influence of feeling from heart..

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raypool

Tue 15th Dec 2015 17:10

Just picked up on this and it has a simple immediacy and delicate quality which conveys a strength of feeling and quite moving for me. Well done - the final lines are the wrapping with the present!!

Ray

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