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Thyme ll

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We've each got different partners now
and we're having a real nice time
we both agreed to separate
Parsley Sage Rosemary and ...

We both were once so in love
now we just stay in touch
we cherish the time we once had
as we don't see each other much.

I once saw her on the bus
once chatted on the phone
we've sent each other a couple of  texts
at work, on the bus, and at home.
               but
We've each got different partners now.

 

words and foto Tommy Carroll

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◄ ...Thyme

...and a new pair of shoes ►

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Tommy Carroll

Sun 20th Dec 2015 12:34

Got it in one Harry- hidden something has been found you rascal ;-) Tommy

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Harry O'Neill

Fri 18th Dec 2015 21:27

Tommy,
It might be just me...but somehow the music of the song seems to infuse it with...what?...I can`t help feeling it`s poignancy somehow.

The whole thing `fits` together.

(laugh if you like...but...)

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 17th Dec 2015 20:22

((giggle)) ;-)

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 17th Dec 2015 19:53

the first time was the best thyme for me Tommy

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