MOVING ON - for my sister
How it seems like a dim distant dream now
When we were kids in those Wiltshire lanes,
You with your horses and boyfriends,
Me with my cycling and trains.
There's Box - and there's Bill Peters' stable...
And sometimes I'm sure to believe
I hear Mum call "Tea's on the table",
And the brother is due home on leave.
Now the years have passed in their own ways
And we've travelled the highways of life;
You've added so much to those innocent days -
Mother...grandmother...Dave's wife.
When you sit there and dream in the lamplight,
When your world's full of those aches and pains,
Lose your thoughts in your days in those damp-bright
Long ago Wiltshire lanes.
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M.C. Newberry
Tue 22nd Dec 2015 18:08
Never one to be bound by formulaic writing, I let the
rhythm dictate the flow. Your comment about the "grandmother" line is noted but I was determined to get
the tribute inherent in that word into the verse somehow
and I've amended the line slightly.