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Just another cover up

2 minutes past midnight,

a shooting star falls,

Piercing the star spangled heaven,

Or you'd like to think it was.

And now your monarch spread eagle,

Is it for peace and mankind in its cost,

That it took to get it up there on that silver dusty surface?

Or did you really go?

And if not -

Then where did all that money go?

 

It's just gone 3 minutes past midnight,

Another meteor has just penetrated,

Your radar and control.

Well that's what you tell us anyway,

But you've known all along.

You know all the lights in the sky.

You can almost set your watches by THEM

 

©David Addington 1997

ufo'sunexplianedconspiracy

◄ The Butterfly- Man

Breaking up is never easy I know, but I have to........... ►

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Stu Buck

Wed 6th Jan 2016 08:11

agree with graham, no need for it. ruins the flow i think. having said that, I have used it in the past. i'm warming towards all lowercase more and more, in my mind it flows better.

this poem is good by the way!

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DavidAddington

Tue 5th Jan 2016 22:58

Thanks for the comments Graham - I'm gonna try to avoid this capital letter thingy me bob. It makes no sense like you say.

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DavidAddington

Tue 5th Jan 2016 22:58

Thanks for the comments Graham - I'm gonna try to avoid this capital letter thingy me bob. It makes no sense like you say.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 2nd Jan 2016 09:52

Ref: starting each line with a capital letter.

This is the biggest can of worms in the poetry sphere.

Personally I can't see the right in it. I think it's lazy and doesn't make sense. Others seem to have given it a credibility that I do not think it deserves, a sort of poetic license. Sadly on a word processor/computer it will occur automatically.

Either way it will draw lovers and haters

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DavidAddington

Fri 1st Jan 2016 22:19

I'm trying to see what difference the structure of this poem makes.

I'd like to learn when and whether you should use capital letters at the start of all new lines, even if it is still the same clause / sentence.

What's the rule about this? Any feedback please.

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