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the souvenir hunter

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the souvenir hunter

the soil dispatched ambassadors
a long time ago
they sought the fallen
in the form of worms
slowly greeting, writhing
sloth like slime, dividing
deleting flesh
from earth
partial skeletons
semi submerged
revelation,a winter winds erosion
a hand still gripping pistol
emerged
as souvenirs you seek
in no mans land
a white knuckle still clasps
a pistol grip
a brass buckle slips
on tin hat rusted
the crown encrusted with holes
a metal jacket
skull leaden slug
cranium
impact
with intact teeth, sinister grin

frozen hold
plundered gold inlays
fading his grave

faint fabric and bone
fetal position thrown
forward by a blast
but the concave still lasts
after all this time, the field
craters eruption imprinted:

with stumbling lament they left

fertile, the poppy fed
soil jet black, still
but surely tinted red.

blissfully blowing this afternoon.

 

PETE CROMPTON 2007

 

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Pete Crompton

Tue 27th Nov 2007 23:59

John, I only just got back from holoday. Limited internet access sorry matey! ok, can you bounce an email? cheers

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John Turner

Tue 27th Nov 2007 11:25

Peter. Your enthusiasm on the night was obviously alcohol inspired. I'm yet to receive an email from you.

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clarissa mckone

Mon 26th Nov 2007 03:28

this is very good, it was as if I was there finding this dead person...ekkkkk...wow..is it a true story?

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